
Quiet whistles
from the balmy breeze
coming up-hill,
passed through the windows.
brought the aroma
of the dancing mango leaves
and summer-grown lemon rines,
just like fresh-cut grass:
delicate
delightful
deserving
for a summer evening.
The silver sun streaks
covered your body,
Feeling the affection from
the warmth
of the air
blow by blow...
A signal that the
gray
grouchy
ghastly city
was far,
and here we had this
green
gentle
glimmering escape.
Bright-green,
green-yellowish,
orangish-red,
glowing mangos hang
from the
copious branches
embellished with leaves,
waiting for the time
for them to fall,
and land beside the lime bush
to have somewhere to lay,
and be tumbled by the tropical breeze,
and then picked up.
The kind of breezes,
the kind of mangos,
the kind of bushes,
that make you truly
sense
smell
and savor
summer lime.
Great Imagery
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isabella i loved your poem. You have a lot of imagery. good job
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